Pick a favorite!

We all know the importance of a good first page. Grab the reader with the first line, and keep em hanging on every word until the last page! Simple right? And if we cut a hundred calories a day and walk for ten minutes, we'll be bikini ready by June 1st! Yeah, uh-uh, right. Still, I love writing first pages. As I've mentioned before, it's kind of an addiction. I can spend weeks, months, years even, revising a first page. Of course it doesn't do much good if there's no last page. I've posted the first page for Betty, which sold to the first publisher I sent it to (Red Sage) and the first page of two works in progress, Good Clean Sex, a steamy contempory and Eternal Ecstasy (comedy erotic demon story) I would love to hear from you on which one you like best and if these first pages would entice you to read the second page.